Mugs full of...<insert alcoholic beverage here>
Posted: Tue Oct 05, 2010 9:14 pm
Greetings! A tavern song I have for you that sort of sprung out of me while at work today. I'd, of course, like some input, but I'd also be interested to see if the characters make sense. It tells a short story, of sorts, and I want to make sure I got the message across, so please feel free to post your interpretation of what happened (setting, who speaks when, etc.) along with feedback, if you've a mind to do so, and we'll see how close (or far off) I am to what I wanted.
Rumor of war in the east
Reached our timid ears
As we sat ‘round the fire we heard
Words of darkest fears
“That’s all talk and nonsense!â€
My cry others did hear
“Cause there’ll be happy times
so long’s our mugs are full of beer!â€
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
The trouble’s far from here!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
Our mugs are full of beer!
“There’s nothin’ to be scared of,
No beast out of tall tales!â€
As we sat ‘round the fire lacking
Several key details
“That’s all talk and nonsense!â€
The Ranger’s voice did wail
“But you don’t have a clue
Because your minds are full of ale!â€
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
Our faces plump and pale!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
Minds were full of ale!
“Leave my tenants be, good sir,
There really is no need!â€
As we sat 'round the fire drunk,
The Ranger he agreed
“It's not talk nor nonsense,
it comes like a stampedeâ€
And then, his cry “But still, this night,
Let’s fill our mugs with mead!â€
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
The fun I’ll not impede!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-Oh!
Fill our mugs with mead!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
The time will come to think!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
But last, this while, we'll drink!
You'd never believe it, but, honest, I'm not a big drinker! *chuckles*
Rumor of war in the east
Reached our timid ears
As we sat ‘round the fire we heard
Words of darkest fears
“That’s all talk and nonsense!â€
My cry others did hear
“Cause there’ll be happy times
so long’s our mugs are full of beer!â€
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
The trouble’s far from here!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
Our mugs are full of beer!
“There’s nothin’ to be scared of,
No beast out of tall tales!â€
As we sat ‘round the fire lacking
Several key details
“That’s all talk and nonsense!â€
The Ranger’s voice did wail
“But you don’t have a clue
Because your minds are full of ale!â€
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
Our faces plump and pale!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
Minds were full of ale!
“Leave my tenants be, good sir,
There really is no need!â€
As we sat 'round the fire drunk,
The Ranger he agreed
“It's not talk nor nonsense,
it comes like a stampedeâ€
And then, his cry “But still, this night,
Let’s fill our mugs with mead!â€
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
The fun I’ll not impede!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-Oh!
Fill our mugs with mead!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
The time will come to think!
Hey-ho, diddle-I-oh!
But last, this while, we'll drink!
You'd never believe it, but, honest, I'm not a big drinker! *chuckles*